I'll probably repeat some of PC2K's comments, but here's what leapt out at me.

- the sparklite isn't much use without tinder
- you could expand your meds to include: Benedryl, Immodium, Sinutab, antacid
- does the Aqua Mira set in your larger kit include a container for the water?

I think it's great that you can carry an actual shelter, too. That seems to me to be a great weakness in most kits. We carry shelter building tools, but not shelter material.

Bear

EDIT: And I forgot to mention that you have no message stuff, like pen or pencil and waterproof paper, for leaving notes or recording bearings and stuff. I carry a Write in the Rain notebook and use the first page for emergency contact information.