I agree that it's a great start. My comments:

* smaller bills
* some kind of blanket (see wool vs fleece thread)
* the tinder can probably be put into a ziplock bag to save space.
* a "few" lighters is probably enough
* you can probably get by with about half of the fishing tackle
* every folding water container I've ever tried has always leaked. Might want to test it out.
* what are you doing for food? I would add some vitamins and at least a few MRE's