digi -- nice start. My first impression is that its way too lon. You are trying to teach on this card - instead you should be trying to get the kid not to panic and stay in one place. That's it.

teacher

My rough edit below


STOP. Sit down. .

STAY WHERE YOU ARE.

WE WILL COME TO FIND YOU. STAY THERE.


6. If it’s cold, stay warm. Put on your hat, gloves and jacket – whatever you may have. But don’t let yourself sweat – sweat can make you colder. Use the poncho and hand warmer to cover up and keep warm.

7. Blow on your whistle. Three shorts blows – WHISTLE WHISTLE WHISTLE tells anyone that hears, that you’re lost and need help. (Don’t blow three whistles unless you’re lost!)


11. If it begins to rain, cover yourself with your rain poncho. Zip up your clothes, and try to get under as much cover < my note : 'what does 'cover ' mean to an 8 year old? what you mean to say is ' gst under a tree'>
as you can to stay dry.

Keep looking at our family picture. WE ARE COMING TO FIND YOU. stay right where you are..

love mom & dad ( and barkley the dog)