Looks pretty good, other than the couple of things other people have mentioned (map, rain gear, etc.)

I usually start with the "Ten Essentials" and work from there.

Map
Compass
Flashlight
Sunglasses
Extra food and water
Extra clothing
Matches (or lighter)
Fire starter (tinder)
FAK
Knife

TP is 11. A hat is 12. You'll really need a pencil if you're navigating with a map and compass. You didn't list the contents of your FAK, but I always make sure I have Imodium and an Ace bandage. And lots of Advil. I'm an old man.

I live in the Southwest, and sometimes hike above the tree line, where there are no handy trees for hammocks. I prefer a sleeping pad. Though I have used a hammock, and they are comfy if nature cooperates.

Kevin B.