Neat job on the booklet. Sorry that I'm going to be
a bit long in this post. It's a bad habit of mine
when someone asks my opinion about stuff written
on a page.
I did get the tip on lightning, but am not sure what else to suggest as we are mostly in a tropical rain forest environment. I would appreciate suggestions on alternatives.
Why not take a picture of a kid actually wearing the
poncho and put it there instead of the arrow pointing under the tree?
The statements for both parents & child to sign are a
touch confusing. For example, you have a statment
"I read this booklet to my Mom or Dad at least 3 times"
and have the parent sign. Okay, so you want the parent
to sign to prove that he or she was read to; however,
the "I" in the statement is the child, not the signer.
The "stay dry" "stay warm" "use sunscreen" pages seem
to be more general info not specific to "if lost"
However, the "if lost" and "get help" pages seem more
related to each other, yet are not next to each other.
It might make more sense to connect these two ideas
(if lost & get help).
On the "get help" page, you show a picture of
two whistles. How about a picture of either
one girl blowing a whistle, or a picture of
three whistles?
If the stuff is laminated, do the kids actually
mark on the pre-hike checklist each time they go out?
Then do you erase it for next time? What about
having a separate "adventure log" for the stuff
that the kids are supposed to check off each time?
E.g. a little page that isn't laminated and
can be replaced with date, adventure name,
and check boxes for initialling the other stuff.
-Kuovonne