see in the faq about picture posting: http://www.equipped.org/ubbthreads/faq_english.php?Cat=#image

First of all, what is you BOB suppose to do and what terrain /area do you life? That will have a serious effect on the contents of your kit.

Kit does not include a whistle. I did spot a mirror, is it a signal mirror?

Whats a foon?

No redundancy in firelighting. If one bic fails, because of non machanical failure, the other one will probably suffer from the same problem. Add something like matches, ferrosium rod, etc.

Add some more firelighting tinder/material. Fuel tablets only provide limited firestarting options.

Add gloves.

Toothbrush and paste is something to consider.