Doug,

I've read your instructions in detail and find them well written. My only suggestion might be to delete any superfluous language to make room for more tips.

In one example of what I mean, I submit this - Under "Water & Food" lies this statement, "Your body is approximately 60% water." IMHO, that statement could be considered superfluous and the user better served by more instructions on first aid, fishing, etc... There are other examples...

M