Nice kit, Frisket. It would be great for a localized situation where you had to bunk with family, neighbours or in a hotel for a while.

The only gap I see is for your upper body. Given the weather in my neck of the woods, I might throw in a fleece sweater or jacket, and a long sleeved shirt or two as well. Since I'm a girl, I'd add a sports bra or two as well. I might sub longjohns for the pj pants too.

You might want to keep the shoes in the bag though. One less thing to grab and corral in a mad dash might be an advantage.

I get that this isn't an equipment based kit but a flashlight might be a welcome addition when sleeping in an unfamiliar place.