Very comprehensive but lots of duplication - what's it weigh?

I'd be tempted to drop some of that and add more food (I know its available in the wild, but catching it or gathering is slow and if you are travelling or hurt it's hard to do - much easier to add dehydrated meals or rice or something)

I'd drop either the hetchet or the machete, and swap the bayonet for a mora (cheap and sharp, good complement to a chopper). Add a small sharpener - minimal loss of functionality, significant weight savings

Other things: Gloves (leather to protect hands), cash and id (always handy)

Otherwise, without knowing quite what the bug out plan is, it's hard to judge how well it fits