I like it. 
I'd probably swap the paperclip for a second safetypin, but that's about it, and then make sure it was well taped on the outside. 
There was a question about tins vs pouches. The answer I have is that it is a sliding scale between crush resistance and moisture resistance, until you shoot off on a tangent and go to things like Otterboxes and mini Pelicans. 
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