LOL!
That was classic.

I think it is good. I see a bit of minor duplication but I assume that is because you meant it to be dividable.
I really like seeing the Blood Clotter.
I will look for that product now and include a package in my FAK.
It is such an obvious addition.
I am often out in the cold and I am no longer on blood thinners, but when I was I remember how hard a minor bleed was to get stopped in the cold.