Looks good to me.
You probably plan to purify water 2 L at a shot, but it might help if you marked the 1 L line on your Platypus.
I also carry an inexpensive fleece or woolen blanket to drape over the injured to combat shock and cold in general.
I think Emergency Essentials has a passable cheap wool blend blanket:
http://beprepared.com/search.asp?t=ss&ss=blanketThe ones at Sportsman's Guide are okay too, once you get the mothproofing aired out.
Bear