+1 on the question of "where are you bugging to?" It sounds like a car kit, and you are using to get home?

For your EDC, swap out the condoms for a second milk bag- I've only ever found two uses for them, the intended one and to cover a rifle muzzle in lousy weather. As water carriers, I've never found them to not suck.

How are you carrying your EDC? And what are you using for BOB's body?

Swap the bullion cubes for ramen seasoning packets. Same thing, better packed. Trust me, the first time you realize that everything in your pack smells like bullion you'll understand this.

Small bills. Smaller than 20s. Folding money is small and light, you're better off with 5s and 1s.

I didn't see a poncho. Saw the socks, thumbs up. Everyone forgets their feet until they really need them.

Without knowing more about what your intensions are for this pack, it is really hard to say.

EDIT:
Oh- since you are in the St Louis area, check out Zombie Squad, they are based in your area. Don't let the squirrelly bits at the forum scare you off, the physical organization seems pretty solid.