I'm slightly confused here. The BOB looks fine, as does your EDC (though everyone after me will add stuff). But, you mention that you want a BOB due to St. Louis's crime rates. Yet, there's nothing in your EDC or BOB that addresses this aspect. No firearm (I lived in MO for 2 years, and know how easy it is to buy them there!), self-defense items (besides the CRKT), is your FAK equipped for a violent encounter, etc.

How do you intend to use the BOB? To leave the city when it gets too violent? That's how I'm interpreting your post, so correct me if I'm wrong.

Now my other suggestions: Given that MO can get a bit chilly, I'd throw in something heavier than Heatsheets and casualty blankets. Unless you plan on running south to the bootheel if you take off, where it's probably warmer than where I lived. Lots of bugs, so some DEET. A real flashlight with your BOB, extra batteries.