Hmmm, lots of replies. Let me see how many I can address at once...
Money - I have no hope that the money and nutrition bar will survive the school year intact. All I can do is provide the tools; as with all adults there are consequences if they choose to misuse them.
Choice of equipment - keeping cost and size down were significant considerations. A lot of the items where things I already had on hand or came with other items I purchased. The backpack, whistle/compass/combo, EOD bar, first aid kit, flashlight, etc all were items on hand. If I had an unlimited budget sure I would have made different choices. Another reason I chose an "old" backpack was that it looked old and wouldn't stand out in a crowd.
Immunizations - the school required just about everything you could think of. As part of her regular supplies she is taking other items for keeping clean and avoiding illness as much as possible. On the other hand in close quarters it is somewhat unavoidable.
Socks, etc. I know she wouldn't keep a decent change of clothes in the backpack so the 2nd instruction on the Do these things first card is to change into good walking clothes and pack a change. Will she do it - again she is an adult and I can do is teach and guide. I won't be there to force her to do anything; that is her choice and her consequences.
Where is she - her college is in Manhattan (NYU). Instead of the coins I put in a good phone card. Coins are heavier and can be used for other things. The phone card can't be used. The other reason I didn't put a Metro card in is, well, I haven't been in the city in a while so I didn't have the option to get one. It may be one of the things I add in BONY v2.
Heat/rain - good suggestions about sunscreen, another thing to add in v2. As for the poncho - naw, she probably won't use it for rain. But it has lots of other potential uses in a disaster, and it was free, and it is very small and light. So in it went. The reason I included 2 of some things (like the poncho and emergency blanket - 1 is a cheap mylar the other is a better AMK one) is that she may very well be traveling with a friend and can share.
The flashlight and radio each have two extra sets of batteries. And there are two 12 hour chemical light sticks. If that's not enough light than nothing I can add will be enough. One factor I had to take into consideration was weight. She would be less inclined to carry something that was really heavy.
For v2 I am considering adding more nutrition bars.
I like the idea of don't open unless emergency letter. Will add that in v2
The FAK is home-built. No sam splint or moleskin. I don't have the complete list here, but basically it will treat cuts, abrasions, etc. Not broken bones or extensive wounds. See comments above about weight and space.
The knife is a small swiss army type folder. I want to add a multi-tool but didn't have one available. Another item for v2.
Thanks for your comments and suggestions!
-Kurt